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September 17th, 2010, 12:02 am

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Reply Sir Bacon, September 16th, 2010, 9:56 pm

Here's one thing I hate about this format: it's so restricting of the dialogue. The original script for this page reads:


Lt. Broham "What was that thing chasing you, Private?"

Pvt. Praktiss "A zombill, sir. Zombie Bullet Bill."

Pvt. Praktiss "Fort Paradigm tried killing zombies by shooting them with Bullet Bills."

Srg. Shroomly "Did it work?"


I like the original dialogue better because of the inclusion of the zombie species name being included, and the cooler fort name of "Fort Paradigm", but because of space restrictions these had to be cut.

And no, I don't script every page, but I scripted five for this mini-arc which I may have to expand to six because things are about to pick up a little speed. The action packed continuation starts Monday! See you then.

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Reply AkumaTh, September 17th, 2010, 9:32 am

If you want to have more space for talking, maybe increase the size of everything by 200%. That way, the images will still be the same just bigger and you'll have more space for text.

Speaking of the comic: I'm guessing it didn't work. Now they got flying zombies.

Reply Sir Bacon, September 17th, 2010, 2:48 pm

@Armanndo, thanks!

@AkumaTh, yeah, I was considering 200% scale, but the comic looked too long when I tried it, and I prefer horizontal "comic strip" style to "four square" or vertical. Their were a few other factors, too, but that was the biggest one.

Now that I think about it, though, maybe I will change the format to 200% vertical, though. That format does have the added advantage of hiding visual punchlines, I've noticed.

Reply James Birdsong (Guest), October 4th, 2010, 7:20 pm

No. It obviously didn't work

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